ok

*That night everyone goes to bed, having an early night. The next day {Saturday} everyone apart from Jas are sitting at the kitchen table. Jas comes down*

Nina: Morning hunny. *Sees her walk past the table* Where are you off too?

Jas: *Opening the door* Just going out To the mall.

Cait: *under her breath* Liar. *Out loud* I'll come with you.

Jas: *Bluntly* No! I just want to go. ALONE *Walks out the front door*

Cait: Seeya. *Runs out after her*

Nina/Jack:

Rhys: I love you mumma

Nina:

Alex: Me too

Nina: What do you kids want?

Alex: The newest nintendo game boy

Rhys: *Hitting her softly* Alex, you weren't thupose to thay{say} that.

Alex: Oppsie.

Nina/Jack: unsure:

*Jas is walking through Erinsborough, Cait is following behind, hiding behind each things. Jas gets the feeling someone is following her*

Jas: *Turning around* Anyone there? Hmm.. don't be silly Jas. *Carrys on walking*

*Jas arrives at 21 Maple Drive. Looking up at the big house infront of her, she walks up the drive, punts her hand softly on the door and stands back. Cait is hiding behind the rubbish bin*

Tom: Hello Do I know you? Oh you must be Jas, I'm Tom, come in.

Jas: You don't look 15? You said you were 15.

Tom: Erm, yeah, erm, I'm 34. Come in.

Jas: *Walking inside the house looking around*

*Tom and Jas talk for a bit, Cait looks through the window, ducking each time they look her way*

Tom: Can I offer you a drink.

Jas: Sure *She looks in her bag for something*

Tom: *He pours her the drink, and without her seeing slips in a pill, a sleeping pill* Here you go.

Jas: Thanks. *Taking it from him.*

Cait: *To herself* NOOOO0000oooo...Jas don't take it. *She bangs on the glass window, then ducks*

Tom: *Jumpy* Whats that? *He goes outside and checks, no-ones there*

*Cait runs as fast as she can home*

Nina: Hello darling. Nice walk?

Cait: *Catching her breath* Yeah...*Goes up to her room*

*Tom comes inside*

Tom: No-one there

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*tom turns around and sees that jas is asleep*

tom: my plan is going to work

*tom goes on to antimsn and talks to cait*

cait: i know were u live and wat ur doing

tom: how unless u know jas

cait: i know more than you think

tom: how would you know her then?

cait: im her sister and i was spying on you wen u put the pill in her drink even though jas is almost 14 and a mum doesnt meen she stupid


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Tom: Well you listen here girlie, i have a gun, and unless you give me 5,000 in the next 48 hours, ur precious sis will die.

Cait: *She looks like this * ur lying.

Tom: wanna bet? get the money and no police, remember no police s!ut.

*Tom has signed out*

Cait: MUM, DAD!!

*Nina/Jack race upstairs*

Cait: don't...please...I'm...Jas... *Brakes down in tears*

Nina: *Hugging her* Whats wrong sweety?

Cait: *Shows Nina'Jack the convo*

Nina:

*Meanwhile*

Jas: *Wakes up. He is holding a gun to her* What are you doing?

Tom: You stupid, stupid little girl, your going to wish you never walked this planet. *He tells her about the convo*

Jas: Please don't hurt me.

Tom: You better pray that you sister brings the money within 48 hours, or you can say byebye.

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jack: we dont have that moneys remember the sea monkeys took it

Nina: JACK now isnt the time to joke around

jack: yes sir

nina: do us a favor jack and shut ur pie hole

jack: yes

nina: im going to to the bank to c how much moneys we gots

jack: but i keep telling you the see monkeys tooked it

nina: jack stay here look after kids

jack: THE SEE MONKEYS TOOKED IT I TELLS YA

nina: bye jack

*nina goes to the bank and theys only gots 4,000*

PEG AWAYS ALEX

Funny one Sarah. me to pegarro.

*Nina arrives home*

Jack: I'm sorry about before. Our little girl is out there.

Nina: We only have 4,000 I think its time to call the police on.

Cait: *Hearing what Nina said* NO! YOU CAN'T DO THAT!...please...no

Nina: We have to...maybe secretly, they know what their doing.

*Rhys and Alex come running in*

Rhys: *Seeing Cait and everyone else have been crying*{Hes not dumb. lol} Whath wrong?

Alex: What he said.

Nina: *Unsure on how to tell them, but decides they need to know* Look, your little sister Jas is in trouble-

Rhys:*Cutting in* thhe[she] been bad?

Nina: No, shes just in trouble and may not be home tonight.

Alex: Has she died?

Nina: NO! Don't be silly... *Nina tells them the truth*

Rhys/Alex:

*Meanwhile*

Jas: Please, don't hurt me, I have a baby, family, please.

Tom: SHUT UP! *Points the gun. He pushes it* BANG!!

Jas: *Really freaked out*

Tom: See the wall? *She doesn't answer him* ANSWER ME!! *She nods* That'll be you if you don't participate, you here me? *She nods again*

*Nina has called the family and told them, they have helped out but they still need at least $400. At Tom's he goes to get something from another room, jas calls the police quickly. Police cars pull up outside the house*

Police:*Through speaker*THIS IS THE POLICE, COME OUT WITH YOUR HANDS UP. AND FREE THE GIRL!! WE HAVE THE MONEY!! {Hehe, they lie}

Tom: *To Jas* Big mistake there, BIG mistake.

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tom: why did u ring them?

jas: i didnt

*tom goes upstarirs and he tells the cops*

tom: beware im armed with cans of spam ( )

cops: oh no hes got spam

tom: leave the money on the door step and leave and ill send jas home

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LOL That was really funny.

*The police put the money at the door, the all hide*

Tom: Phew, your lucky they've gone kiddo.

* He goes outside, picks up the money just then*

Police: FREEZE!!

Tom:

Police: You have the right to remain silence, anything you do say will be held against you in court. { Always wanted to say that}

Jas: *Been taken out with police*

Nina/Jack/Cait: JAS!! *They run up to her and give her a big hug*

Tom: *To Jas*

Police: Right! That will be taken to an affense and held against you. { }

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nina: jas are you alright

jas: i think so who told you guys about this

cait: i did i saw all the convos u had with him and then i talked to him it was scary

jas: thanks 4 saving my cait *huggles*

cait:*huggles*

nina i think we should take you to the docter to get you cheaked over

jas: ok mum

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*They all head to the hospital and are waiting in the waiting room, just then Sarah comes out from a room looking like she hasn't slept for days*

Nina: Sarah? *She comes over* How are they doing?

Sarah: Delta is ok now...but my little boy, the don't know if he will survive, he in theater right now. But nothing seems to work. Only bad stuff.

Nina: I'm sorry *Hugs her*

Doctor: Sarah, your little boys calling for you. *Sarah: * You can go in and see him, hes proggressed really well with the operation. *Sarah goes* Nina, what can I do you for?

Nina: Well...*Explains, which i can't be botherd to say *

Doctor: *Checking over Jas* You'll be fine.

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These are only short because me and Sarah both want to get a turn at doing this. And now I'm lost for ideas.

*everyone turns around and guess who walks in to the hosplie(sp)*

jas: BEN wat r u doing here i thought u were in england

ben: i was untill i heard that my neice and nefew were sick

jas: u didnt even some down 4 u fcuking mothers funeral u dcik wank

ben: well sry i had no time ok now im goin got c my sister

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Jas:

*In the room*

Ben: *Cough* Hello.

Sarah: BEN!! *Runs up and hugs him* I'm so scared.

Ben: I'm here now. I just have to go take care of a few things.

*Ben goes out to Jas*

Ben: I'd like to see my daughter.

Jas: FINE!!







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*jas give ben ellie*

jas: wat ever u do dont drop her

ben: i know how to hold i friggin baby

jas: do u want to take her 4 tonight

ben: ok

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*Later that night, Ben has come to pick up Ellie. Jas hands Ellie to him and goes upstairs to get her stuff. He is bouncing her up and down in his arms*

Ben: *Baby voice* Who's a cute little girl, yes you are, cute little girl. *Ellie starts to giggle. Normal voice* We are going to have so much fun tonight.

*Ellie struggles in his arms. Ben goes to stop her moving, he moves his had out from under her*

Ben: Stop moving. *Getting grumpy* STOP IT!!



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*ben takes ellie to sarahs house and looks after her*

*its night tim eand shes crying*

ben: SHUT THE FCUK UP *ben hits ellie and she sits still and gost o sleep*











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Wow... great pegs you guys..

*Ben goes back to the lounge, Ellie crys again*

Ben: *Going in and picking her up* SHUT UP!!

*Ben sways her from side to side. Ellie doesn't stop crying, All of a sudden Ellie falls out of his hands and lands smack on the ground*

Ellie: *Shes in pain*

Ben: OMG!! *Panicking* What do I do? What do I do?

*Ben rings up for an ambulance. Ellie is very critical. They arrive at the hospital. Ellie is taken into theater*

Sarah: What happened?

Ben: *Still very panicky* I-I...d-dropped...h-her

Sarah: *Hugs him*

Ben: *Spotting the doctor* How is she?

Doctor: She seems to have a broken leg, broken arm and a major head injury. I think its best if I call Jas.

Ben:

Doctor: What happened?

Ben: It was an accident, I dropped her

*The Doctor calls the Scully's house*

Nina: Hello, Nina Tucker speaking.

Doctor: Hello Nina, this is Doctor Brenda from Erinsborough hospital.

Nina: Everything ok.

Doctor: Ellie has just been brought in... *Explains story*

Nina: We'll be there asap. *She hungs up* JAS!! JACK!!

Jack/Jack: *Coming downstairs* What?

Nina: We have to go the the hospital.

Jack/Jas: Why?

Nina: Ellie has been admited. *Explains story*

Jas: THAT EVIL DIRT BAG!!

*The arrive at the hospital*

Jas: How's my baby?

Doctor: *Explains bout the injurys*

Jas: *Turning to Ben* HOW COULD YOU!! YOU B@$T@RD!!

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Thanks Diana.

youre welcome, man Ben is a b@$t@rd alright.

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Jack: Jas, calm down. This is for me to deal with. BEN, YOU KNOW YOU COULD OF KILLED THAT LITTLE GIRL, HOW DARE YOU!!

Ben: I WANT TO GET FULL CUSTODY, AFTER ALL ITS MY BABY TOO AND I'M ALOT OLDER, THEY WILL GIVE HER TO ME!!

Jack/Nina/Jas:

Jas: YOU STAY AWAY FROM MY DAUGHTER, YOU GOT IT!!.

Ben: I won't, I have full permission to do what I want.

Jas:

Jack: STAY THE HELL AWAY FROM MY DAUGHTER AND ELLIE, COME NEAR THEM AND YOU'LL DIE!!

Ben: Is that a threat Mr.Scully?

Jack: JUST STAY AWAY!!

Doctor: *Coming out* Please keep it down out here. Ben, please leave. Jas you can see your daughter.

*Nina and Jack leave home and Jas stays by Ellies bedside*

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jas: ellie im never letting you near him agian i dont want you to die

ellie: mummy

jas: OMCOD u said ur first word *hugs her*

*cait walks in*

jas: cait ellie said her first word

cait: wat was it

jas: mummy

cait: awww how cute

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*Nina and Jack are in bed. Nina is asleep, Jack can't sleep. He gets up. Nina wakes up*

Nina: Jack? Where are you going?

Jack: Go back to sleep hunny. I'm just going for a walk.

Nina: At this time of the night?? {Clock reads 1:31am}

Jack: I'll be back soon. *Kisses Nina's forhead and leaves*

*Jack is walking along the park, thinking*

Jack:*thinking* Ben is so going to get it, how dare he hurt my grandaughter, and then hurt Jas with this matter. Hmm...What to do, to get him out of our life for good.

*Jack goes back home after hes takes care of a few things*

*The next day. Cait comes downstairs*

Nina: How are you this morning, Cait?

Cait:

Nina: Same.

RING RING

Jack: I'll get it. *Picking up the phone* Hello, Jack Scully speaking.

Person: Hi, this is Constable Herman.

Jack: Constable, what can I do you for?

Nina/Cait:

CH:{Constable Herman} Ben McCormack was found dead early this morning, in the park. We found him in a bush, he has been murded. Could you please pass this onto everyone in your family.

Jack: Sure.

*Jack hangs up. He Gathers the family around and tells them*

Cait: He deserved it.

KNOCK KNOCK

Jack: *Answering it* Hello.

CH: Jack Scully?

Jack: Thats me?

CH: We would like to take you down to the station, we have a few questions to ask you about the case of Ben McCormack.

Jack: What?

CH: You threatend him yesterday?

Jack: *Laughing it off* That was just a joke.

CH: Down the station now.

Nina: *Coming up behind him* My husband, did NOT murder anyone.

CH: Answer this please? Where were you between 1-2am

Nina: We were BOTH in bed sleeping.

CH: Alright. I'd like you both to come down the station to make a full statement later on please.

Nina/Jack: Sure.

*CH goes. The close the door*

Nina: Jack?

Jack: Yeah

Nina: We need to talk.

*They walk into the lounge where no-one is {Kids upstairs} They sit on the couch*

Nina: Where did you go on your walk?

Jack: *Not thinking* The park.

Nina:

Jack: No Nina, I didn't, I didn't kill him.

Nina:

Jack: Please believe me.

Nina: I-I can't

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nina: did u or didnt u?

jack: i would never kill someone

nina: rite

jack: nina i swear i didnt dont u belive me?

nina: i dont know

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RING RING

Jack: I'll get it. Hello.

CH: This is Constable Herman, I'm so sorry for my wrong acusation, acusing you of the murder. We have just had a confession. David Law, who deals with drugs, he gave some steriods to Ben, but Ben didn't pay it off, so he killed him.

Jack So, what happens now?

CH: You don't have to come down ta make a statement, and we'll keep you posted.

Jack: Thanks. *Hangs up. Walks into the lounge* I'd like to let you know, that was Constable Herman, the murderer confessed up.

Nina: Oh Jack, I am so, so sorry.

Jack: Its ok.

Nina: No, its not, I should of believed you, when you said you didn't do it. I'm so sorry. Do you still love me? { }

Jack: *Walking over to her and placing his hands around her waist* Thats a hard question. *She hits him softly* Nah, of course I love you Nina, I love you so much.

Nina: I love you to. *She kisses him*

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nina:jack i think wwe should tell jas that ben dead

jack: that would be smart

*they get to the hospile(sp)*

nina: hi jas hows ellie

jas: ellie said her first words

nina: wat were they

jas: its was mummy

nina: awww

jack: anyway jas we need to tell you this ben got murded last night

jas: ellie dont gots a dad anymore






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I'll peg later. Just want to look at some posts in the forum.

Can someone please ?

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Thanks Diana.

Do you want to peg?

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I have an idea? I don't even know it.

I like! I like it alot!

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Well done Alex and Sarah

Thanks.

Great storyling alex & sarah kept me entertained

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