Hey y'all!
here is my poem for Nina and Jack, they are my all time fav couple!

Could it be the flaws are so small,
I can't seem to find.
Are the lies so truthful?
And the heart so kind?
Could it be I am so blind.
That I missed the vision from my eye.
Am I so deaf.
I couldn't comprehend a lie.
That other soul,
The one who stole your heart.
The one who came between us.
And tore us apart.
Did you fight it?
For the sake of you and me.
Could you tell the truth.
Before everything I will see.
I don't want to be blind.
And make a mistake.
Because this is one,
I can not unmake.

Well what do you think????
Have a nice arvo.
Love Amy

That is good.

thats cool

that's great...i really like it

Teah

QUOTE (Delta_the_Butterfly1 @ Aug 29 2003, 04:44 PM)

Hey y'all! here is my poem for Nina and Jack, they are my all time fav couple! Could it be the flaws are so small, I can't seem to find. Are the lies so truthful? And the heart so kind? Could it be I am so blind. That I missed the vision from my eye. Am I so deaf. I couldn't comprehend a lie. That other soul, The one who stole your heart. The one who came between us. And tore us apart. Did you fight it? For the sake of you and me. Could you tell the truth. Before everything I will see. I don't want to be blind. And make a mistake. Because this is one, I can not unmake. Well what do you think???? Have a nice arvo. Love Amy

Hey, thats a really good, sweet poem I like it!

My names Amy too hehe!

Thats a really cute poem! I like it! Well done

I love it!

QUOTE (Delta_Kru_Gurl @ Aug 29 2003, 08:35 PM)

QUOTE (Delta_the_Butterfly1 @ Aug 29 2003, 04:44 PM) Hey y'all! here is my poem for Nina and Jack, they are my all time fav couple! Could it be the flaws are so small, I can't seem to find. Are the lies so truthful? And the heart so kind? Could it be I am so blind. That I missed the vision from my eye. Am I so deaf. I couldn't comprehend a lie. That other soul, The one who stole your heart. The one who came between us. And tore us apart. Did you fight it? For the sake of you and me. Could you tell the truth. Before everything I will see. I don't want to be blind. And make a mistake. Because this is one, I can not unmake. Well what do you think???? Have a nice arvo. Love Amy Hey, thats a really good, sweet poem I like it! My names Amy too hehe!

Hehe! ^Thats heaps kewl! U even spell it like me!
Love always Amy

lovely you have real talent

Wow, what a lovely poem!
i agree with dolphin_chick, you must have lots of real talent!

Awww thankyou...

brill